I find the 'red ribbon' layer and the LIVE FOR TODAY layer less successful than the humanoid figure layer and (what I'll call) the 'background' layer. The red ribbon works from a compositional standpoint and for this reason should not necessarily be eliminated, but it appears incongruous with the rest of the image. The red ribbon itself could be blended (or altered) differently so it doesn't stick out in quite the same gaudy fashion--though of course that's just one man's opinion.
The text is positioned and matched/blended in aesthetically pleasing fashion, and the message is not too distracting -- but since I can read it my eyes spend more time on it than perhaps should be devoted to perusing the rest of the image. (Minor observation)

Thanks for the critique. I definitely hear you on the ribbon/text points, as those very much were the last thing to be added, and didn't get the same care everything else did. I thought the ribbon shoulda been blended differently, I'll just have to figure out how to make it work.

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